TOEFL iBT writing samples with answers (scored by AI)

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In this article, I am going to upload my sample answer.

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Why I post this?

TOEFL is important and difficult

TOEFL iBT is a really important examination.

The university requires a certain TOEFL score if you are not native in English and would like to study abroad.

Studying for TOEFL iBT is extremely difficult suppose you study by yourself.

One of the reasons is that you cannot compare your answer with others, especially a speaking and writing section.

Shabby sample answers are needed

Most sample answers on the web are too beautiful because they are written by the best test-takers.

Therefore, I posted my shabby answer to this blog.

TOEFL iBT writing samples with answers [I got TOEFL itp 560]
Sample answer written by me (I got TOEFL itp 560) In Japan, It is rare to see someone talking to a stranger. Japanese, ...

My sample answer and its score

The question is this

Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage.

(This one is a typical integrated writing question on TOEFL iBT)

My sample answer

Scored by AI

I made this essay scored by AI, and obtained the result as shown below.

According to this analysis,

Words Total: 261

Sentence Total: 13

Average Words Per Sentence: 20

Unique Word Total: 84

A typical essay at this level:
• addresses the writing topic adequately but may slight parts of the task
• is adequately organized and developed
• uses some details to support a thesis or illustrate an idea
• demonstrates adequate but possibly inconsistent facility with syntax and usage
• may contain some errors that occasionally obscure meaning

This essay could get between 18 and 24 points.

 

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TOEFL iBT writing samples with answers [I got TOEFL itp 560]
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